main topic problem

When I write I see I have a hard time figuring out how to get my statement across. I feel I get it across in my way but to my peers I just don’t seem like it get to them. I believe that mainly I tend to try to please the teacher and forget about others but that’s not what’s asked for. My statement can be about eating a hotdog and I’ll mention about eating chicken then a hot dog. I rather not talk about one topic and that’s all. I see no excuse for what I do it’s just that I grew up learning like that. I always have the thought in mind that I’m doing a good job but when the teacher grades it I’m really surprised. When that’s all over stress is done and I’m relieved. Now I see that I can make changes to get this topic across and make it so much better to my teacher. Not only she does that but she teaches me how to show a lead. With that lead is there I can attract the president if I wanted. Well that’s how I feel when I’m writing. It may sound like I’m cocky in writing but the teacher always find mistakes. I just have in mind that if you’re not confident in writing it’s hard to get that better grade. So I may fall off my topic a little because I see that there’s always a little more detail out there that may excite you.